![]() ![]() Yes, he realizes how trifling that simile is, but why even put it in there? I have never read she was pale like mayonnaise in a story. ![]() Nitpick: Why the heck is brown-golden skin and fried chicken in the same sentence when Julio is describing Romiette. I'm not saying there aren't light-hearted, juvenile sixteen-year-olds, but are African kings and presidents really out here visiting her mom's pan-African boutique? This was before Facebook was even popular, so how in the world would they know about the store? Also, why was Ben so gracious and friendly after Julio gave him a bloody nose? Like it would've been better if they started on the wrong foot but learned they were wrong about each other. ![]() Romiette seems really young in her first journal entry. "It's hard to know what to be afraid of when you don't even know what the threat is."Okay, you need to have some suspension of disbelief when reading this story. To be honest, I had low expectations, but I thought the romance might be cute. ![]()
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